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Need to show the world what Im all about, open my mouth but it wont come out.Setting up for constant failure stuck in a cell with fear as my jailor.Silent curse always presenttrapping thoughts that...
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i think sometimes we all get stuck in a rut..you captured the feeling well in your poem..especially loved the last two lines..hey welcome to the factory!.. inside each soul there is music...let the...
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Fegumm, welcome to the Factory. This is quite a deep piece, and I enjoyed it a lot. If I might, there are a few things that need fixing.You're missing some appostrophies in I'm and won't, and if I'm...
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Hi ...welcome to the factory...Jan has some good suggestions so I won't repeat them..as to the theme...well said... been there...done that.Thanks for sharing..Regards,wayneBluewater Ink
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A most excellent effort scribe, but as mentioned, a few typos that need a bit of attention. Well done anyway! MrLeslie. http://p200.ezboard.com/baspiringpoets"
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I liked the knowing honesty of this line,"Temporary freedom delivered by a glass"and like the others, I love your closing lines!Wanda
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